Wish it was Finished...

It would have been really good... Funny how you say in your intro that you've made this series back in 2005 when you were 14. I was really young at the time and I was AMAZED at how good the story was. The entire series alone kept making me wanting to know more about what happens next, who will live and who will die, etc. Sucks to see that now 5 - 6 years later and I'm older, I still enjoy this series. I can't say I'm not disappointed that it was unfinished but I can pretty much interpret what happened so it makes up for it. You did very good at flash making and I'm actually glad that this is all over. Fio and Roman make it out alive, Marco (my favorite character) sadly dies, but you making this flash with all that time, I am still amazed at this. You sir are great with this... because it was unfinished I was going to give it 5 stars sadly... but because it was so great from when I was young to how I am now still loving this series I leave it at 9 (because I want to learn flash but I don't know how... lol) This was a great series but its sad to see how it was unfinished... It was a great story from beginning to end. Great Job on this!

Great! only 1 thing...

Shouldnt Metal Man die because he got hit with his own metal blade? Or did he just get upgraded? XD its great I loved it.

AWW MAN Where did you get the strider nes sprites?

Its an awesome flash video man =D

Oh boy. This was quite the trip. I actually enjoyed this VN, however there is a LOT of room for improvement.

For starters: Rookie Mistake, there seems to be a image missing towards the end of the game when you choose your fate with Ayame. Her image disappears a little bit before the choices and returns. (I actually didn't catch that until my second playthrough, funny enough)

One big thing: get rid of the RPG Maker sound effects and quirks. I was rather enjoying the pictures of these girls but could not help but laugh when the RPG Maker hit sound played and the screen shook. Took a bit out of the experience.

Things you should probably avoid next time: listing your patreon and stuff would have been fine, had this been a demo for a bigger game. If you want money out of your art/games then you should make something worth money. I don't think 4 dollars is worth playing this game to get the 2 extra images and true ending to a game this small. Also it's kind of a dick move to put a picture as the Game's Icon and not have it anywhere in game as a tease.

Now for the things I liked about the game:
The character art and the scenes are well designed, though I admit they could use a BIT of polish (but I'm not an artist, I wish I could draw half as good as this) it's a bit lacking on the backgrounds, but I understand this story takes place either the school or at home. Your character choices are limited to either getting with the Teacher or her daughter, but it's good enough for a story this short and sweet. (Gotta say I was actually caught off guard and shocked at what happened in one of Ayame's endings...) The character's reactions and things to the situations were believable and matched the tone of story. I know someone in the comments section complained about this story "not being accurate to Japanese culture" but it's a fucking hentai. You just go with it.

Overall I would not pay for the true ending or the 2 other pictures. However, I see a lot of potential in your work and I'm very excited to see more. 3.5/5. Not bad for a first game. :D

LOL This is freaking hilarious.

Is it weird that I eneded up getting 404 mph? XD anyways great job.

I see that people are a little touchy on this because the guy is singing in Portuguese. Well... I hate to be that cheesy mother fucker but music is a language on it's own. I'm really digging this song man. Catchy riff and a kick ass solo man. Love it!

I had to rediscover this song because I played something like it on my guitar and felt "wait... I heard this off Super Crazy Guitar Maniac Deluxe 2..." I searched for it and finally found it! I added my own lyrics to it when I was playing it, and judging by the title, I think the lyrics will fit. Do you mind if I re-record this song with my own style put to it? (by that I mean extend it and add my own lyrics to it) Credit will obviously be given to you for writing the song. (I know some people don't really need/want to ask permission to sample or build upon the song, but I'd feel like an ass if I didn't)